October 21, 2008
Please someone who English is his/her native language edits this short text?
Robert asked:
Hi,
Hi,
I want to put this text on my website. So it should be fluent without any problem. Please someone who speaks English as his first language edits this text, correct its punctuation, cast its sentences…. To put in a nutshell, do any changes that seems to be needed.
In advance, I thank you for your generous time
MY TEXT:
Direct service results cheaper and more reliable service. At present several online web hosting providers are working as sub-partners of BraveNet. In other words, they resell this service to people in more expensive cost. By omitting intermediates, here you have this chance to obtain this service directly, cheaper and more reliable.
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Comments on Please someone who English is his/her native language edits this short text?
……results IN cheaper….
AT A more expensive cost…..
INTERMIDIARIES here.you have A chance( 2 this’s not good)
more RELIABLY…..
otherwise well done!
Direct service, results in cheaper and more reliable service. At present, several on-line web hosting providers, are working as sun-partners of BraveNet. In other words, they resell this service to people more expensively. By omitting intermediates, you have a chance to obtain this service directly, cheaper and more reliable.
I used British/Australian English and with BraveNet it could be Brave Net but I’m not sure of the company name so you can double check that! Hope this helps
EDIT: Person at the bottom has written it better!!!!
Direct service results in cheaper and more reliable service. At present, there are several online web hosting providers, which are working as sub-partners of BraveNet. In other words, they resell this service to people at a more expensive price. By omitting intermediates, here you have a chance to obtain this service directly, making it cheaper and more reliable.
there wasnt much you needed to change…
…. service to people at higher costs. By omitting intermediates you have here the chance to obtain this service directly, cheaper and from a reliable source.
Direct service results in cheaper and more reliable service. At the present time several online web hosting providers are working as sub-partners of BraveNet. In other words, they resell this service to customers at a higher price. By omitting intermediates you have an opportunity to obtain this more reliable service directly and cheaper than others.